The diagram shows how biofuel called Ethanol is produced
This diagram illustrates how ethanol is manufactured from fuel.
It is clear that there are six distinct stages to render ethanol, from plants converting them into ethanol, and using fuel in transportation.
Initially, plants and trees absorb carbon dioxide and sunlight from the atmosphere. This process called photosynthesis which helps to convert these two ingredients into energy. Once fully grown, people harvest the plants before distributing them from pre-processing. The next stage is called cellulose; it is further processed into sugar through chemical treatments which transform it into sugar molecules.
Following this, sugar molecules are processed into ethanol through the addition of microbes, ethanol is created. This ethanol is then used in transportation industry for cars, trucks, and plants. These vehicles burn up ethanol, releasing carbon dioxide as a waste into the environment which bring up pollution. It also affects the growth of plants, however the trees and plants absorbs carbon dioxide during photosynthesis, restarting the cycle again.
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...osynthesis, restarting the cycle again.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79113924051 4.92477711251 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95789092615 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645569620253 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4697941057 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154407003329 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686750020372 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724670181465 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125259983982 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766798400473 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 11.4140731707 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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