Some people say that school children should be mainly taught about the literature (e.g fiction and poetry) of their own country because it is more important than that of other countries.
To what extent do you agree?
Some argue that it is more vital for children to be educated about their country’s literature rather than that of other countries. While learning about foreign literature can give children new perspectives, it is the local one helping develop their own identity and native language.
Admittedly, being instructed about the beauty of other countries through written resources enables a child to compare and contrast their values with those of other nations. For instance, exploring Grimme’s fairy tales introduces young children to the Western ethos of sharing and caring or core values of individualism and entrepreneurship, providing a basis for drawing parallels between their cultures and foreign ones. Not only can such cultural distinctions deepen their sense of cultural identity but also enrich their life experience. Furthermore, the insights into cultural diversity, gained through consuming overseas literature, also contributes to their cross-cultural communication abilities essential in collaborating with people from different backgrounds in the future.
Nevertheless, it is indisputable that native literature plays a pivotal role in shaping a person’s identity and linguistic proficiency. The optimal periods for an individual to internalize domestic customs and master their mother tongue are during formative years of schooling. Therefore, if they were inadequately exposed to domestic literature at school, they would experience feelings of alienation and struggle to navigate in their original society. A result, many Vietnamese families with children growing up abroad strive to foster their children’s connection to their native language through Vietnamese novels and poetry. Through the exposure to Vietnamese literary works, the children will be inspired to learn Vietnamese dialects as well as grammar, and local values such as family unity, facilitating their integration into their ancestral roots.
In conclusion, while teaching children about foreign literature allows them to accept and respect cultural differences, it is classical novels or poetry directly cultivating their individual identity, which cannot be achieved without the emphasis on teaching their indigenous knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1916.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 6.04416403785 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07221187492 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627760252366 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.9941235996 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.666666667 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4166666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243486660246 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963823726367 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881157966794 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166487687146 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809056221228 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.05 12.4159519038 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.8 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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