In many countries, crime rates amongst younger people have been rising.
Discuss the causes and solutions for this problem.
In recent years, there has been a rise in the rate of juvenile delinquency. In my opinion, the primary reason behind this is the lack of effective and proper education and care from family and the best solutions are related to offering parenting courses and social welfare.
The main factor contributing to this situation is family background and education, which plays a key role in shaping children’s personality and behavior. Young children are the most vulnerable and easily influenced by those who they frequently interact with. However, nowadays, parents often prioritize their career development over educating or spending quality time with their children and do not have enough essential parenting skills. While some parents can be seriously strict and violent - both mentally and physically, others have a tendency to overindulge their kids. Besides, children from families with violent or drug-abuse parents are also more likely to become would-be criminals as their parents are typically their role models. This unstable upbringing without proper parental support and consistent guidance increases the likelihood of children committing crimes.
Crime rates among younger individuals will recede with effective educational approach and sufficient care from both families and society. Parents should be encouraged or even required to take parental courses with experts to change their mindset and learn how to guide their kids and deal with their problems. Parents will also learn how to create a secure and warm environment in which their children will be delicately nurtured to become more well-rounded individuals. In addition, children from underprivileged and broken families should receive more psychological as well as financial care and support from the community. In Vietnam, many charity and non-profit organizations such as the program “Kindness” and “Pairs of Leaves for Caring” have successfully supported huge numbers of disadvantaged children in all regions over the country. These are practical actions that can contribute to eliminating juvenile delinquency cases in society.
In conclusion, the rise in youth crimes is primarily attributed to poor family background and education approach and the viable solutions are the combined effort of both parents and society in offering children with stable upbringing through developing parenting skills and supporting programs.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 639, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun charity seems to be countable; consider using: 'many charities'.
Suggestion: many charities
...support from the community. In Vietnam, many charity and non-profit organizations such as th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2062.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75977653631 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92597137612 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583798882682 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4103318626 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.466666667 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8666666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100024777138 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407561342549 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475365256392 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0778813019614 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360291219345 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 639, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun charity seems to be countable; consider using: 'many charities'.
Suggestion: many charities
...support from the community. In Vietnam, many charity and non-profit organizations such as th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2062.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75977653631 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92597137612 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583798882682 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4103318626 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.466666667 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8666666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100024777138 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407561342549 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475365256392 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0778813019614 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360291219345 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.