The charts below show the change in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graphs illustrate the transformation in possession of electrical devices and quantity of time committed to household chores in one nation from 1920 to 2019.
Overall, the proportions of the ownership of all the three electrical appliances increased. It is also noticeable that the number of hours for housework decreased over time.
Regarding the first line graph, all the three categories had an upward tendency. The washing machine was the appliance which were used the most, at exactly 40% in the beginning. Its percentage grew by 30% 40 years later. Vacuum cleaner began in the second place, at 30% and then rose by 20% each 20 years afterwards. The refrigerator was the device which was used the least in households, nearly 0% in the start; however, it experienced a surge to 90% during the next 40 years. From 1960, the washing machine grew steadily to approximately 75% despite a minor fall in 1980. The vacuum cleaner rose to 100% in 2000 and stay unchanged until the final year. The refrigerator increased to 100% in 1980 and then remained the same until 2000.
Concerning the second line graph, the hours for housework witnessed a downward trend throughout the period of time. Staring at 50 hours, the figure decreased by 15% per 20 years. It kept going down to around 15% in 1980, and stayed there 20 years later. The number of hours almost reached 10% in the final year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: VACUUM_CLEANER_HOOVER[1]
Message: This expression is common for American English. Did you mean 'hoover'?
Suggestion: Hoover
... percentage grew by 30% 40 years later. Vacuum cleaner began in the second place, at 30% and t...
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Line 3, column 578, Rule ID: VACUUM_CLEANER_HOOVER[1]
Message: This expression is common for American English. Did you mean 'hoover'?
Suggestion: hoover
...y 75% despite a minor fall in 1980. The vacuum cleaner rose to 100% in 2000 and stay unchanged...
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Line 4, column 101, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...tnessed a downward trend throughout the period of time. Staring at 50 hours, the figure decrea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, regarding, second, so, then, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 240.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84583333333 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65562492645 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5737993084 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5333333333 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0888528505168 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0295204347149 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499280113697 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844861785613 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666329335416 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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