Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge. To what extent is this a positive or a negative development.
Thanks to the development of technology, people now have more opportunities to access easily many sources on the internet. And it is simple for someone to download individually free copyrighted music and books from the internet. In my opinion, this is a negative development.
Admittedly, it is believe that this improvement will encourage people to listen to music and read books more frequently. Moreover, student, who has no income, will have more chance to enter the large source of books for their study and research. Ironically, by no means will companies , which create music and books on th...
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Sentence: Admittedly, it is believe that this improvement will encourage people to listen to music and read books more frequently.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and believe
flaws:
Sentence Length SD: 5.294 7.5
The conclusion is too short.
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Category: Good Excellent
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