Any recent invention that you think proved beneficial or detrimental to society?
Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals new invention has been one of the most prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain whether it is beneficial or harmful. I will elaborate this notion in the further paragraphs.
To begin with, automation has gifted us plenty of things. The first and foremost, cell phone is major invention in this globe which makes our life very convenient. There are various merits of using mobile phone. It has altered the way of communication as compared to earlier time. As a case in point, phone helps us in trouble time when we have any kind difficulty.
Probing ahead, there are distinct new features installed in cell phone that helps us to stay in touch with our friends. These days, almost every work is done on phone with the help of internet and it also saves the time. Last but not the least, it is used to keep our data safe as well as entertain us with different social apps.
To conclude, I firmly believe that technology is undeniable part of our society. Cell phones have great impact in every individual’s life. It changes lifestyle of people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...k reflection on the typical day reveals new invention has been one of the most prominent topi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78538812785 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65796572624 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639269406393 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0368012124 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.8666666667 104.977214359 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6 20.9669160288 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 7.25397266985 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0449402562583 0.242375264174 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0133227327622 0.0925447433944 14% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0221773244176 0.071462118173 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0246875398682 0.151781067708 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246925772872 0.0609392437508 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 12.6369458128 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.1260098522 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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