Environment pollution is too alarming to be managed by individuals. Real change can be made at the government level. What extent do you agree or disagree?
The problem of environment pollution has been increasing at a very rapid rate. Some people believe that it already has reached to an extent where it is not possible for the individuals to tackle it and only the government can solve this problem while others opposes this idea. This essay will discuss why both the government and individuals are equally responsible to combat the issue of environment pollution.
To tackle the problem of pollution government is accountable because it has enough resources and power to solve it. Government, for example, can strictly enforce various laws and implement policies to reduce the usage of personal vehicles. Furthermore, government can make people more aware about the problem of environment pollution and its serious consequences by organizing the seminars at schools, colleges and various public places. The authority of power and money makes government responsible to combat such serious issue of pollution.
Individuals can also play a very significant role in reducing the pollution level. They can strictly follow the rules and regulations as set by the government. An individual, for instance, can reduce the usage of personal vehicles and instead prefer more public transport to travel. The changes made by the individual efforts make common people also accountable to solve pollution problem.
This essay discussed why both government and individuals collective efforts are requires combat the severe problem of pollution. In my opinion, despite importance of collaboration between government and people, government is more responsible towards such serious issues related to environment.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 5.75862068966 434% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96905641577 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5666256676 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.692307692 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166649587611 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664722919154 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351923074032 0.071462118173 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105958360617 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288461501994 0.0609392437508 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 53.1260098522 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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