Certain kind of music promote learning in life agree or disagree?
The important of certain kind of music .Which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this nation. This essay will elaborate both aspects of tread and this will lead a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reason which will further explain this argument but the most important preponderant one steams fact that all people Listen the music and easy complete on their task. It is the best way in complete your own work. Songs of our brains have a great effect if the songs are good. Another pivotal aspect for this argument is that some songs are good like that are against drunkenness. Needless to say that all these merits stand certain kind of music promote learning in life in a good steams.
However, there are some pitfalls that a negate this arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this tread but the most alarming is that songs are such that children carry bad habits. Which have a bad effect on children’s brains. As illustration some singers are used in drugs and weapons in her songs. Besides some are children have become addicted to drunk by listening to such songs. Because of such songs our society has a very bad effect. Hence, it is apparent why many ae against certain kinds of music promote learning in life.
According to the arguments aforementioned above one can reach a conclusion that the benefit of certain kinds of music promote learning in life are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, the potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96254681648 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5955785777 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554307116105 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.3396599148 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3333333333 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26505536503 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952008582853 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159875754675 0.071462118173 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180743952054 0.151781067708 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728779883779 0.0609392437508 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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