Parent are responsible for the behaviour of their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The responsibility of parents toward children has been marked by controversy among people. While many of them claim that parents should be comprehensively responsible for children’s manner, I am totally convinced that they should just shoulder responsibility for giving a proper upbringing to the new generations.
Unlike past decades, nowadays parents have less time to spend with their children owing to play their professional role out of the home. As a result, children spend a great deal of time in care-givers centres or at schools which have different policy and responsibility toward children’s upbringing. Therefore, babysitters, education authorities and generally society seem to be the main responsible for distinguishing between right and wrong from an early age for children. As it firmly shows, under this circumstances parents’ role in children upbringing is not such it was in the past so everything that parents can do for the new generation is to provide appropriate conditions for them so that they can recognize their troubling deeds and how to be responsible for their own acts.
Moreover, today with the widespread use of internet and social networks by the new generations, children’s behaviour are affected by numerous factors which are not related to parents and their families. For example, juvenile delinquency which has been increased in the recent decade may have roots in some social networks which encourage youngsters to commit crimes. As it is clear, parents cannot be responsible for such criminal behaviour of their young children and children should take the responsibility of what they did.
As a conclusion, I would like to reaffirm that while parents should take the responsibility for providing an appropriate condition for upbringing well-behaved children, they are not responsible for what path their children choose to take.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 507, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...for children. As it firmly shows, under this circumstances parents' role in chi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52920962199 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30086214298 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54295532646 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.0934852585 50.4703680194 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.9 104.977214359 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1 20.9669160288 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410773897183 0.242375264174 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186385181815 0.0925447433944 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968654806038 0.071462118173 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280405913649 0.151781067708 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307070305347 0.0609392437508 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 12.6369458128 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.39 11.5310837438 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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