As cities expanding, some people claims governments should look forward creating better networks of public transportation available for everyone rather than building more roads for vehicle owing population, what's your opinion? Give some examples or experience to support.
The most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people think that roads and infrastructures are not so much important. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one's life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that government should creating a better network of public transportation for everyone than building more roads for vehicle owning population, it cannot only contribute to save people time and provide comfortability, but it also leads to numerous other benefits. Thanks to the wide range of advantages being offered by creating a better network of public transportation, it can not only provide one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but can also enhance the productivity and standard of their life, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as, augmenting their chances of a better life is concerns.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is not only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows such a system, one broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibilities and dedication. It is apparent why many are in favor of creating a better network of public transportation for everyone than building more roads.
To conclude that, the benefits of creating a better network of public transportation for everyone than building more roads for vehicles owning population are indeed too great to ignore.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ll only lead to a myriad of concerns in ones life. However, I do not entirely accept...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03571428571 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00353533187 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.1012262755 50.4703680194 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.181818182 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 7.25397266985 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277265223503 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106089818981 0.0925447433944 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147077894389 0.071462118173 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191135802004 0.151781067708 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126825994928 0.0609392437508 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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