A healthy life requires a combination of both proper diet and physical exercise. Some people believe that exercise is key to a healthy life while other people consider a balanced diet to be the main factor. However, I believe that a balanced diet is a more important factor than exercise for a healthy body.
To begin with, our body is made of the various elements and these elements come from various food that we eat. It is necessary to supply all the nutrients to our body to function properly. To cite an example, water consists of about 70% of the human body and therefore it is important to drink enough water. Therefore, there is no doubt that a balanced diet is key to healthy living as it protects us from malnutrition and other types of deficiencies.
On the other hand, there is another group of people who believe that exercise is the main factor for healthy living because exercise makes our body fit and helps our body organs function properly. It is often believed that exercise helps us to keep our body active throughout the day. However, there is abundant proof that without food we cannot survive. For instance, the only source of energy for our body is food. Thus, although many people cite physical exercise to be a major factor, it is still clearer to me that a balanced diet remains above all.
In conclusion, it is the balanced food that provides energy to our body and we use this energy to involve ourselves in different physical activities. Thus, it is cannot be denied that a balanced diet is the ultimate factor for healthy living and vastly outweighs exercise to be the main factor for a healthy body.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 537, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean '(remains)'?
Suggestion: (remains)
...till clearer to me that a balanced diet remains above all. In conclusion, it is the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.5418719212 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 20.9802955665 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67820069204 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48514702737 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446366782007 0.580463131201 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9202304522 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5714285714 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.25397266985 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179630779585 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732090841697 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860029518034 0.071462118173 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128798607323 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0907231987727 0.0609392437508 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.32886699507 88% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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