The claim that animals have rights has been subjected as a matter of debate since the 1970’s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned?
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">Humans are the most dangerous animal on this planet, as we have acending scientific opportunities to cultivate various remidies to safegaurd our future, but are other animals or species on earth gifted by such talent? Therefore in the world where survival of the fittest is the only rule that follows, I would like to add that most powerful should take care of the most vulnerable as well.
Zoo are good source of income around the world in almost all countries, even zoo are much adored by all ages of people. From years the motive of zoo has change a lot from just caging animal to preserving them with their natural existance pattern. It has been essential onus of government to make sure that all Zoo authorities are performing thier duties with high reagards to avoid any hazards to animal or human in Zoo. Zoo in 21st centuary is no more to keep the animal for charity collection or display. As per a journal in Harvard University tons of N.G.O across the globe has helped to upfront the right of animals and preservation of special species.
Many Zoo are now being converted into more of an open Zoo, where visitors are into a cage to view animals, we have large aquarium where all sea animals get full space to live and swim. The most important concern has shifted toward animal safety and preservation in present days. More young people are trained and given jobs in Zoo so that we get good and proper care for the Animals with an acending Job opportiunities within the country. This helps to increase the tourist attraction and solve the job scarcity issue, resulting in the GDP growth of the country.
Albeit humans are the most danegerus animal but being knowledgable we are caring for the most vulnerable and saving it for a new generation.</span><br>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 263, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
... of the most vulnerable as well. Zoo are good source of income around the world ...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...imal for charity collection or display. As per a journal in Harvard University ton...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun Zoo seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many zoos'.
Suggestion: Many zoos
...nd preservation of special species. Many Zoo are now being converted into more of an...
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...vation of special species. Many Zoo are now being converted into more of an ope...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 311.0 242.827586207 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84565916399 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9662758474 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588424437299 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.9694340636 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.583333333 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9166666667 20.9669160288 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 7.25397266985 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306089873258 0.242375264174 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105717844346 0.0925447433944 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490548970605 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162686541967 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694923273654 0.0609392437508 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.