The claim that animals have rights has been subjected as a matter of debate since the 1970’s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned?
The enduring dissension in the public psyche is zoo helping or hurting our animals. Besides, it has to examine whether zoo is constructive or grunt on society. Opinion in the
people's mind while developing a region whilst other to create issues. here I will expalin my outlook by scrutinizing on both sides of the argument.
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investigation executes the people unhappy in this society.
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compensate a confirmatory stance, say and construe with diverse up come to the people till again with their prosperity.
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sense clash of upsurge my views without partially precise my prospect in no distress.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ned in the block. Thus the discrepancies mean to connote with zoos. Still, the ab...
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...e context. Further, notable points will added knowledge. So, the key glances on anima...
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...on animals have rights to live in zoo on compensate a confirmatory stance, say an...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...ot which varies remains conflict in it. Hence zoo helping animals entail that brings ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, look, so, still, thus, while, as to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 215.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0511627907 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58997526565 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641860465116 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0853187507 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5714285714 104.977214359 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3571428571 20.9669160288 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.12807881773 218% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250732496024 0.242375264174 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080801263445 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093794465245 0.071462118173 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0905683458576 0.151781067708 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104487000626 0.0609392437508 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 12.6369458128 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.