What do you think about our environment considering the fact that there has been steady increase in pollution and affects like global warming are increasing as time is passing by? Are we under jeopardy? Is the humanity safe?
In the budding population of our earth the moot question about our environmental loss and ecological imbalance is still not under consideration. Advocating the fact about the negligence toward our global warming issue I would like to share my opinion as below.
I agree with fact that humanity is under threat and our future is in jeopardy. With globalization and industrialization we are contributing a mammoth amount of dirt and pollution into our environment, the ascending usage of public vehicles are threat to our natural fossil fuels. The poisonous gases from industries are causing the ozone layer to riddle. The depletion of this protective atmospheric shield is causing influx of harmful and cosmic rays. These are resulting in many form of skin cancer in various geographical location of the globe.
I think our environment is toward the doom of its era. If we human do nothing, than soon we need to start our habitation under the surface of earth. The vegetation will be lost, humanity will be living on cosmetic foods and preservatives to survive. Life on earth will be perished above the sea level. The drift in the atmospheric pressure may cause aquatic life to dearth, because we have recently observed oceanic earthquake which causes Tsunami, Phony, Katrina all these natural disaster. Fossil fuels and gases will no longer be an option leaving transportation as a halt.
The awareness about ecological balance need to be shared in a massive way. Alternative mode of fuels need to be discovered. Solar and Wind energy to be used at all major industries. At the best human need to switch their habit to much eco affable mode. Otherwise life on earth will be buried under the load of pollution and dust.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 477, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun form seems to be countable; consider using: 'many forms'.
Suggestion: many forms
...and cosmic rays. These are resulting in many form of skin cancer in various geographical ...
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Line 9, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...oom of its era. If we human do nothing, than soon we need to start our habitation un...
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Line 13, column 58, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a massive way" with adverb for "massive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ut ecological balance need to be shared in a massive way. Alternative mode of fuels need to be d...
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Line 13, column 228, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...e best human need to switch their habit to much eco affable mode. Otherwise life o...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
...h their habit to much eco affable mode. Otherwise life on earth will be buried under the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 31.9359605911 153% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.75862068966 295% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04166666667 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85500291885 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3188951757 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6666666667 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.77777777778 7.25397266985 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19021190011 0.242375264174 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573334336895 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648125717697 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117885289707 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508075447521 0.0609392437508 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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