What do you think about our environment considering the fact that there has been steady increase in pollution and affects like global warming are increasing as time is passing by? Are we under jeopardy? Is the humanity safe?
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.5pt;line-height:115%;font-family:
"Segoe UI","sans-serif";color:black;background:lightgrey">In the budding
population of our earth the moot question about our environmental loss and
ecological imbalance is still not under consideration. Advocating the fact
about the negligence toward our global warming issue I would like to share my
opinion as below. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.5pt;line-height:115%;font-family:
"Segoe UI","sans-serif";color:black;background:lightgrey"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.5pt;line-height:115%;font-family:
"Segoe UI","sans-serif";color:black;background:lightgrey">I agree with fact
that humanity is under threat and our future is in jeopardy. With globalization
and industrialization we are contributing a mammoth amount of dirt and
pollution into our environment, the ascending usage of public vehicles are
threat to our natural fossil fuels. The poisonous gases from industries are
causing the ozone layer to riddle. The depletion of this protective atmospheric
shield is causing influx of harmful and cosmic rays. These are resulting in
many form of skin cancer in various geographical location of the globe. <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="background-color: lightgrey; color: black; font-family: "Segoe UI", sans-serif; font-size: 11.5pt;">I think our </span><span style="background-color: lightgrey; color: black; font-family: "Segoe UI", sans-serif; font-size: 11.5pt;">environment is toward the doom of its era. If we human do nothing, than soon we</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.5pt;line-height:115%;font-family:
"Segoe UI","sans-serif";color:black;background:lightgrey">need to start our habitation under the surface of earth. The vegetation will be
lost, humanity will be living on cosmetic foods and preservatives to survive. Life
on earth will be perished above the sea level. The drift in the atmospheric
pressure may cause aquatic life to dearth, because we have recently observed
oceanic earthquake which causes Tsunami, Phony, Katrina all these natural disaster.
Fossil fuels and gases will no longer be an option leaving transportation as a
halt. <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.5pt;line-height:115%;font-family:
"Segoe UI","sans-serif";color:black;background:lightgrey"><o:p> </o:p></span><span style="background-color: lightgrey; color: black; font-family: "Segoe UI", sans-serif; font-size: 11.5pt;">The awareness about ecological</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.5pt;line-height:115%;font-family:
"Segoe UI","sans-serif";color:black;background:lightgrey">balance need to be shared in a massive way. Alternative mode of fuels need to
be discovered. Solar and Wind energy to be used at all major industries. At the
best human need to switch their habit to much eco affable mode. Otherwise life
on earth will be buried under the load of pollution and dust.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 31.9359605911 153% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.75862068966 295% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3145.0 1207.87684729 260% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 343.0 242.827586207 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 9.16909620991 5.00649968141 183% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 3.92707691288 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 13.4183742357 2.71678728327 494% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 198.0 139.433497537 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577259475219 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 788.4 379.143842365 208% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.3 1.57093596059 146% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 164.000724554 50.4703680194 325% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 174.722222222 104.977214359 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0555555556 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.77777777778 7.25397266985 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 29.0 4.12807881773 703% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 5.33497536946 469% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0578866729828 0.242375264174 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337254353869 0.0925447433944 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467587720368 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0323315924589 0.151781067708 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469889974262 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.3 12.6369458128 248% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -7.03 53.1260098522 -13% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.0 10.9458128079 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 35.91 11.5310837438 311% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 55.0591133005 191% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.94827586207 176% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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