The claim that animals have rights has been subjected as a matter of debate since the 1970’s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned?
The claims of animals having rights is being debated since 1970's. Zoos have come into existance inorder to save animals from extinction and some argue that zoos have been hurting animals in the thrust of money. This matter opened an intersting point of debate which will be explained in this essay.
With the decline in forest cover, animals have to find a proper place to support and sustain themselves. As such, Zoos have come into existance because of mankind hunting animals at an alarming rate leading to disruption in the ecology. Zoos maintain a perfect ecology for the animals where they are at a will to roam and exhibit themselves. A point to be noted that whenever anyone visiting the zoo, we can see that no animal is allowed to come out without its will and people are kept in a position such that it can be obsered from all the locations. A recent survey conducted by a particular university shows that more than two thirds of the animals that are sought to be extinct are found in zoos.
On the other side of the coin, people think that zoos are primarily indulged in making money and focus is shifted in such a way that anuimals are harmed to make the money. This could be the case in the animal shows where animals are entrapped in particular space and constrained to it. People are also in the opinion that zoos have disturbed their livelihood and confined them.
Animals in zoo are always supported by one trained person and they can never be hurt. Xoos have to play a vital role in maintaning the ecology by helping animals to prevent from extinction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, third, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.5418719212 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62633451957 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33972707104 2.71678728327 86% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548042704626 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 424.8 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4415332588 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 7.25397266985 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423661344501 0.242375264174 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161964331998 0.0925447433944 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104388413472 0.071462118173 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278585453664 0.151781067708 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105781542017 0.0609392437508 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.5310837438 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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