Team sports are generally promoted as a great way to keep fit and build character. However, sporting events such as soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behaviour. If sporting events cause antisocial behaviour, can team sports really be good for us?
Team sports itself means that people are more intended to work as a team and are more inclined towards building team spirit and character. But in some team sports antisocial behaviour is involved . This has opened up a debate in recent times saying whether team sports is good or not. Working or playing in teams has to be the prime motto in shaping the behaviour of how to be more social which will be dealt in this essay.
Now a days in the competitive world, one cannot do all the things on their own. So he has to involve as a team either in office or sports. Leadership skills can only be deployed in an individual if he can control the team which could happen primarily in sports especially team sports. But in recent times, people are in the notion that team sports are inducing violence or antisocial behaviour between rival supporters. But one cannot forgot the bonding that has been created mainly because of the team sport that made them to carve for one another.
Team sports are always be a helping hand to any individual. As people are mentioning about the quarrels, one cannot forgot that quarreling is happening in between groups and all are here to support for a team. So people has to take the sport sportfully and act accordingly. When I was an university student, I myself has involved in varous team sports which made me enacted to various persons and made me to form a group.
Team sports can never be the blaming reason for violent behaviour. In my opinion, person can be shaped only because of team activities and mainly team sports which led them to be involve in more accustomed way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, so, as to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.5418719212 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59861591696 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42686362679 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512110726644 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5728034029 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.06666666667 7.25397266985 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275910237039 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12264281553 0.0925447433944 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777717279726 0.071462118173 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190196917019 0.151781067708 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195696968759 0.0609392437508 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 53.1260098522 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.9458128079 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 11.5310837438 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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