Company Top level authorities should or should not take employees suggestions or ideas to take any decision. How far do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience.
Employees are the pillars and plays a pivotal role in an organization's success. However, the business leaders of many organisations are skeptical to take suggestion from their workforce as part of critical business decision. This essay will dicuss the why an organisation should listen to their worker's idea and insight, and its negative impact.
On the one hand, employers should involve their empoyees in decision making by listening to their feedback and suggestions. This action from the senior management empower the workforce and make the workers perform well, thereby yielding more revenue to the organisation. Moreover, the job satisfaction of these labor will be rapidly increasing. For instance, the technology giant, IBM, always cascade their upcoming plans for novel products to their employees and get feedback from them for improving the overall quality of the product. As a result, employers will be regular to office and will be loyal to their bosses.
On the other hand, some company CEOs are from top-notch MBA graduates and have a plethora of experience in making a crucial business decision. These leaders tend to anticipate the outcome of their action and act accordingly. Additionally, they are people who work independently and don't rely on anyone to complete their task.For example, the founder of Apple Inc., Steve Jobs, is a self-independent leader and always take his own decision which results a massive success in the mobile industry. Thus, few leaders tend are capable of taking decisions on their own.
In nutshell, this essay described why a company should hear ideas and suggestions from their staff and also explained the reason why come CEOs act independently. In my opinion, an idea from the employees tend to add value to the organization growth and organisation should encourage seeking support from their staffs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, however, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30847457627 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86879415275 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572881355932 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4106157758 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.857142857 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168299250761 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060739986083 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492325415816 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118069806318 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562029129097 0.0609392437508 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 55.0591133005 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.