Tobacco mainly in the form of cigarettes is one of the most widely used drugs in the world. Over a billion adults legally smoke tobacco every day. The long term health costs are high for smokers themselves and for the wider community in terms of health care costs and lost productivity.
Do governments have a legitimate role to legislate to protect citizens from the harmful effects of their own decisions to smoke or are such decisions up to the individual?
Tobacco becomes a menace threat for a human life, which is a prominent drug used by over a billion adults mainly in the form of cigarettes. While some people think that governments have legitimate role to take legal action against smoking, others think that everyone has the right to make decisions if they want to quit smoking or not. This essay will discuss both views in detail with an example.
To commence with, governments should take legal action against those companies who are producing cigarettes at a rapid pace. There are many countries in the world that have banned cigarettes production. For instance, Dubai has prohibited the production and utilization of tobacco in any form. That is why the mortality rates in Dubai are less than other countries. Many teenagers are already predisposed by the usage of tobacco, which makes more difficult for them to get rid of cigarettes. That is why governments and adults must work together to distribute the knowledge about enduring effects of tobacco.
On the other hand, some people maintain that people are smoking because it gives them pleasure. According to proponents, the main reason people are smoking to curtail their daily life stress and to be more active. These people have underestimated the adverse and long term effects of the drug tobacco. For example, research done by MIT proved that millions of people died every year because of lung cancer which is mainly caused by the consumption of tobacco. Apart from lung cancer tobacco can cause diverse health issues such as, heart attack, asthma, etc.
In conclusion, tobacco must be removed from the menu because of its harmful effects. In my opinion, those people with the habit of smoking are not just putting themselves in endure health effects, but also people around them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03020134228 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51102922737 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610738255034 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1805294539 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6875 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275697318383 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828467835215 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698378240019 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151221480306 0.151781067708 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338611710012 0.0609392437508 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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