A county becomes more interesting and develops more quickly when its population includes a mixture of nationalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The importance of exchanging people from different backgrounds in order to improve the development of a country, which was always debatable, has now become controversial. The substantial influence of opening the boards for the entrance of outsiders has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on individuals in recent years. It can be said that people who are against the mix of cultures in a place are actually against its own development, which is intrinsically related to the fear of having to share its own patrimony or lose its identity. This essay will elaborate both points of view, and how people must be better educated in order to overcome this fear and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are many reasons why the diversity in a nation is so important and how humankind develops different skills and thought when able to leave and experiment new realities that come from other people's perspectives. For instance, when governments open the door of their countries to people from abroad, they also open a sea of possibilities, that goes from market innovation until culinary introduction, in a glorious spread of culture over the world.
Another key justification for upholding this opinion is that some developing countries need to exchange its people in order to develop new skills and potential. The world should make itself more available to receive and give it back in an exchange of lives.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that in fact a nation is part of the conjunct of many mixes and that is what makes the world so interesting full of hope, even though some countries are not as fortunate as others.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, so, thus, as for, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95104895105 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85282117982 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587412587413 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.5024630542 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.1984860922 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.333333333 104.977214359 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7777777778 20.9669160288 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109162543122 0.242375264174 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438489449202 0.0925447433944 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281862715455 0.071462118173 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0671963055892 0.151781067708 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234930010937 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 12.6369458128 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.3980295567 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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