One way to solve the problem of confestion in cities is to build sky trains which run overhead rather than on or under the ground.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of using this solution to solve congestion?
Some people believe that an effective way to improve the transportation ways in a city is to construct trains that will run on the sky instead of overbuilding more trains on the ground or under it. Although I understand why these people see it as a possible successful solution to the problem of traffic jam especially in mega cities, I understand that there are pros and cons associated with this alternative and that is what this essay will discuss.
The increased number of cars and vehicles circulating in the streets has brought a series of problems to the current society and modern world. To solve this problem, most of the big cities are using engineering methods such as building tunnels and more vias and roads, trying to give new alternatives of routes to people traveling towards streets on pick hours from their house to work and so on. Instead of building more bridges and more subways and metros, the government should stimulate the construction of sky trains once the sky is still not as used as the regular ground vias.
On the other hand, if the engineering started constructing as many sky trains as the demand asks for, in a near future we would have the skies even more visually polluted as the ground already is. Not only just the visual pollution but also the emission of more gases to the atmosphere could generate more problems in the future and that is an element of great a concern in the globalized world that makes use of unadvertised pollution agents.
To sum up, I believe that the congestion problem is something that deserves more study in order to find a better solution that will not have a significant impact in the sky and also will be well used for everyone.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, well, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71237458194 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62516454904 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.5024630542 180% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.337824646 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.125 104.977214359 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.375 20.9669160288 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263200814133 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106735905067 0.0925447433944 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568014130897 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14774726422 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574351578459 0.0609392437508 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 12.6369458128 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.9458128079 151% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.3980295567 162% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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