If voting is compulsory in a democratic society, what conclusions can we draw about “The nature of democracy”?
The effect of compulsory vote, which was always debatable, has now become controversial. The substantial influence performing a democratic vote has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on citizens in recent years. This essay will elaborate on how societies should have the voice to decide whether giving a vote or not and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are many reasons why voting should not be compulsory, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that our federal constitution ensures the right of being free. Hence, from the moment the authorities of a nation stablish that their people are obligated to do something, they lose the right of freedom, therefore, the real meaning of democracy.
Another key justification for the upholding this notion is that people have different backgrounds and also distinct points of view. From this perspective, the government should make an effort to identify relevant people who are more engaged to subjects related to politic aspects of a country. Consequently, this statement should be discussed with more focus in order to be well handled by the competent leaders.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that democracy comes with freedom thoughts and every human being should be given the option to decide whether he wants to choose someone or abstain himself of this choice
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1615720524 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76935092608 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663755458515 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.410389541 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.333333333 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4444444444 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0710882446523 0.242375264174 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0301564250627 0.0925447433944 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320589361664 0.071462118173 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0442631628837 0.151781067708 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370201745695 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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