The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems…so who do u think should be responsible for solving it? Is it the governments, organization or each individual?
In today's world where people are aware of the problems that make our own environment dangerous to live as caused a long-term debate as to who should be held responsible for such situation. While some agree with the statement that states government and organization are responsible for making such situation, I believe each individual is responsible for making environment dangerous to live. We will further discuss the reason for why each individual should be held responsible for solving this situation.
Firstly, if each individual contributes their portion to their environment it will create a huge impact on the environment as each action taken by an individual will be accounted for a mass number of people's action. Therefore, it is up to an individual to create change from within in order to make their environment safe to live. It is proven that even an individual person has the power to drive the mind of masses, hence, if an individual thinks to changes his environment to good or bad it will spark a chain reaction in the mind of other individuals thus creating a mass number of people's action in resolving environmental issues.
Secondly, it is the mass of the people for which government and organization work for. If mass of people do not show any interest in resolving problems of their environment than governments will not come up with plans. Even among mass an individual as enough power to demonstrate its ability to solve an environmental problem that would create mass awareness and would eventually create an interest to solve problem among the government and organization to make their environment safe to live. Thus we see how individual is not only responsible but holds power in making environment safe to live.
To conclude, an individual plays a primary role in effecting the environment they live in, their action could influence the mass of people and hence can resolve many problems that even government or organization may fail to do so. This draws the conclusion that an individual is responsible for solving an environmental problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...h government and organization work for. If mass of people do not show any interest...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...to make their environment safe to live. Thus we see how individual is not only respo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 5.75862068966 434% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1207.87684729 144% => OK
No of words: 343.0 242.827586207 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0612244898 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 3.92707691288 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98136283256 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448979591837 0.580463131201 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 379.143842365 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.0505981678 50.4703680194 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.666666667 104.977214359 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5833333333 20.9669160288 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397102550439 0.242375264174 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17608505866 0.0925447433944 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700902797174 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264995313491 0.151781067708 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091423495644 0.0609392437508 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 12.6369458128 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.1260098522 81% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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