The environments we are living in is in danger due to various problems… so who do you think should be responsible for solving it? Is it the governments, organizations or each individual?
The environment problems such as global warming, pollution, deforestation and many more have been increasing at an exponential rate. Some people believe that only government is responsible for solving them while others maintain that individuals and organisations are responsible to solve them. I believe that the government, organisations and individuals are all equally responsible to solve them.
To begin with, the role of government is very crucial in combating such serious issues. Firstly, government has enough resources and power to solve them. To tackle the problem of pollution, for example, government can strictly implement policies to restrict the usage of more private vehicles. Furthermore, government can penalize those who do not follow environmental laws. Moreover, government can strictly enforce a law to ban the usage of plastic. The government also can reduce the amount of deforestation by encouraging vertical construction.
On the other hand, to combat environmental issues various organisations in collaboration with non-government organisations, can make people aware by organizing seminars at schools and colleges. Not only the organisations but also the individuals can also improve the situation by following the laws and rules implemented by the government.they can educate others about dire consequences of environment problems.
To conclude, environmental issues can only be solved by cooperation between administration, organisations and people and hence they should work together to combat them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, moreover, so, while, for example, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 5.75862068966 365% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.99099099099 5.00649968141 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4712168823 2.71678728327 128% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59009009009 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5925997982 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.833333333 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.25397266985 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151877734808 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587744921517 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475548645855 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956688544859 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489410340069 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 53.1260098522 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 10.9458128079 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.46 11.5310837438 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.