Imitating celebrities in sports and movies is good or bad? Many young people nowadays are imitating celebrities in sports and movies. In your opinion, is this good or bad? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience.
Celebrities always have a tremendous influence on society. These days both sports and film stars are impersonated by many youngsters. This essay will discuss the reasons why copying these famous personalities has both positive and negative effects on society.
To begin with, Emulating famous people from both the showbiz and sport sector is very beneficial for society due to many reasons. Firstly, the hard work of these celebrities to achieve success becomes a source of inspiration for youngsters. When they try to copy them they also become ready to do struggle through which celebrities became successful in their life. For example, a recent study has shown that significant number of individuals got success in their life because they followed life pattern of their favorite celebrity. Furthermore, the noble causes such as running NGOs,done by both film and sports stars also inspire youngsters to be an ideal and responsible citizens.
on the other hand, when the youngsters try to imitate the lavish lifestyle of famous people they indulge in illegal activities.they are unaware of the dire consequences of such things. A recent survey, for instance, has shown that many youngsters in the western world has become addicted to drugs because of the influence of celebrities on them.
To conclude, there is no reason to deny the fact that celebrities have a very profound effect on society in either way. In my opinion, despite some disadvantages, impersonating the movie and sport stars is a good thing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22131147541 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88061697888 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58606557377 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4239208257 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.166666667 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.25397266985 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16571640637 0.242375264174 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631980169563 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402825998686 0.071462118173 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104926161789 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324580229988 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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