Extreme sports like skiing, rafting, diving should be banned. Agree or disagree? Argumentative / persuasive/ opinionated type essay.
In this 21st Century, extreme sports widely popular among both men and women between the ages of 19 and 40. While some people consider these activities are appreciated because of its thrill and excitement, others think that involving in these dangerous sports lead to disaster. The essay will discuss why these events are indeed needed for the youngsters to overcome fear and anxiety.
These intense activities are not dangerous to citizens instead provides much self-satisfaction. To show their capabilities and guts, participants from all over the world are attracted towards these extreme sports. Every year, for example, 10000 participants are performing skydiving in Florida with no casualties. As a result of this exponential growth with all safety measures, there is no reason why youngsters should not get involved in these events.
On the other hand, in spite of these arguments, extreme sports results in various unfavorable consequences. Events with improper safety measures and untrained professionals lead to major accidents, sometimes causing death. According to Times Magazine, January 2018 edition, a survey showed around 50 adults lost their lives and some of them were severely injured in bungee jump sport. From the above all statement, people lives should be at risk when they are involved in these cheap thrill activities without any safety measures from unauthorized organizations.
Extreme sports should be conducted by well-organized companies under the government supervision to overcome accidents. Taking these arguments into consideration, I conclude that unharmful extreme sports are essential to maintaining health and physical fitness of each individual to lead a good standard of living.
In conclusion, adults can involve in extreme sports which should be maintained by local government with proper safety measures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 279.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65949820789 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95753443437 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 139.433497537 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634408602151 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7743598551 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.785714286 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14845516137 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545416660846 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491656705959 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995882463968 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508605707522 0.0609392437508 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 11.5310837438 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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