Fast food has become a part of our society. What is the impact of fast food on human life?
From birth to death, most of our efforts are concerned with fulfillment of basic needs like food, shelter and clothing, while food is major need of human life. But nowadays mostly people are dependent on the fast food, therefore i will discuss some impacts of fast food on human life in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, fast food is completely wastage of money, because if people can make good and healthy food in the homes, then why they recommend the fast food. Moreover, people prefer the restaurants,sometime those are not properly neat and clean, due to which they have to face some diseases like stomach problems and fast food is more oily, which increase the obesity problems in the people. Furthermore, if people will not make food in homes, then they cannot learn about homemade dishes.
On the flip side, while some people think fast food save their time, which spend on the food making process. Besides this, people can spend time with their family, when they go outside in the restaurants and they also think they get chance to meet different kinds of people, which increase their experience.
In conclusion, every coin has two sides, likewise, this topic also has mixed bag. But my opinion is people should only homemade food, it is very beneficial for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86697247706 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4244366923 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605504587156 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8310726602 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.888888889 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5555555556 7.25397266985 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34354997664 0.242375264174 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16035941842 0.0925447433944 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137742964592 0.071462118173 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208787513961 0.151781067708 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142756597444 0.0609392437508 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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