The ideas of space travel are fantastic these days and scientists are very fascinated towards it. However, there are many environment problems in our planet that we should resolve first before considering space travel that should cost a significant sum. What is your opinion? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience.
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day revels space travel has been one of most prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain the positive and negative impacts.
To begin with, nowadays space travel is fantastic for scientists because they get aware of life sustainable in other planet. Scientists get more knowledge about space. Furthermore, they cope up with depletion of natural and non-renewable sources. Also, if scientists bring more ideas and research more they help to developing our country. Our society become come popular.
On the other hand, there should be some negative points used in space travel. There are many problems faced by scientists like environment problem. Firstly, Government should resolve basics society problems like unemployment and poverty. These are main problems faced by peoples in our country. Also, there are some main problems in our country scientists waste their money in big research and they become failed in their research. They damage their equipments by wasted their money. They can take risk of their own life. Moreover, if government should resolve problems our society become very famous.
Overall, we will say that scientists make more new ideas and become success. Also, government should help to our society problems for development and growth of our country.
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| 2019-07-01 | harpreet hundal | 55 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...development and growth of our country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37826086957 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61369448593 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578260869565 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.5024630542 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6772697876 50.4703680194 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.7222222222 104.977214359 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7777777778 20.9669160288 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72222222222 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291687151287 0.242375264174 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906783211505 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705094546215 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15799699499 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591696908451 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 10.9458128079 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.3980295567 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.5123152709 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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