How mass communication influence our lives especially the children. Discuss advantages and disadvantages.
In the real world, our children are influence with a lot information and mass communication in the tv and social medial that could be had sensible meanings that need to been discuss first in home with parents like sex. Actually this topic become more controversial since social media are in our lives and we can found advantages like to feel more close with friends and families, to know about economic and politic but a lot people claim that mass communication in the children are really dangerous for they develop.
Some advantages like explore different topics, where children can find really easy information that they need for school or read magazines, is a way to develop lecture skills and spelling these are examples about the influence that mass information will have in the society. if the information that they are searching is good or bad is when parents need to enter and avoid this kind of materials. For example and according with Melbourne University in 2016 more that 40% the decisions that adults are taking in this moment in Australia is because when they were children the mass information that they had access was not appropriate for children.
However, we need to understand that the world is changing and parents and families need to change and create new forms to raise the children. More talking in home, asking questions where children could be feel more confident and to do more exercise will be helped for the future.
To conlude, the mass information always have been an important topic to talk and more if we want to protect our children, but In my opinion the decisions that children will be taken in the future is just responsibility of parents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[5]
Message: Did you mean 'be'?
Suggestion: be
...d be had sensible meanings that need to been discuss first in home with parents like...
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Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'discussed'.
Suggestion: discussed
...had sensible meanings that need to been discuss first in home with parents like sex. Ac...
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Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...s information will have in the society. if the information that they are searching...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, really, so, for example, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.5418719212 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 5.94088669951 252% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 287.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87804878049 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61548799977 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508710801394 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.5024630542 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.8886665068 50.4703680194 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.0 104.977214359 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.875 20.9669160288 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.25397266985 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220498868907 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980748384095 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694432690367 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13677164981 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787536537319 0.0609392437508 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 12.6369458128 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.94827586207 196% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.3980295567 154% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.5123152709 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.