Imitating celebrities in sports and movies is good or bad?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals imitating celebrities in sports and movies has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussions people always been intrigued to analyze and explain celebrities in sports movies good or bad effect on common man. Regarding this I would say my viewpoints in given paragraphs.
On the one hand, celebrities in sports and movies are good in common man. Because with the help of movies and sports people came to know how the celebrities got successful in their lives. Some sports man before the stars how they do hard work in their lives. If they work hard day to day they will get success and the mission. Some people see the celebrities movies how to the successful man in our life. By watching movies people get inspired with the struggle of hero so they also dream big and decide to achieve them.
On the other hand, some people forget their culture. They waste their money as well as time. Probing further, Some masses become habitual of smoking and drinking which is very bad habit and harmful for them as well.
To conclude, It is crystal clear from above that it is good habit to follow celebrities and achieve their dreams.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72888888889 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43843301232 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.4625520018 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8461538462 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3076923077 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363825232376 0.242375264174 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119521935234 0.0925447433944 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153523707286 0.071462118173 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192068508258 0.151781067708 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117416842555 0.0609392437508 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 12.6369458128 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 53.1260098522 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.32886699507 86% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 55.0591133005 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.0 Out of 90
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