It is a foolish idea to get married before finishing the study and settling down. Agree or not?
Recently, the phenomenon of early marriage and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although claimed by many that getting married is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that having a family can be a plus, and I will discuss that throughout this essay.
Making a family may provide the society with some remarkable effects which are rooted in the fact that living with a partner, as well as being mature, are closely bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic research which discovered that being independent can be accounted for an advantage.
In contrast, it has been suggested that being financially independent may also have some negative effects on personal characteristics, particularly for younger people. As a tangible example, a scientific research conducted by a prestigious university has revealed that the downside of marriage is correlated negatively with family breakdown. Hence, more investigation is required to gain a deep understanding of a family relationship and its negative outcomes.
To conclude, while there are several convincing arguments on both sides, I strongly believe that the benefits of a formal marriage far outweigh its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, so, well, while, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 209.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45454545455 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24593103954 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641148325359 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4609327212 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 126.666666667 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0225336422966 0.242375264174 9% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00967160754723 0.0925447433944 10% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273554371265 0.071462118173 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0136755364588 0.151781067708 9% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236867239674 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 53.1260098522 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.32886699507 124% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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