One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is to see a colossal upsurge in the amount of xenophobia in the western countries. There is a widespread worry that increased amount of xenophobia will lead to a myriad of concern in migrants' life. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and merits serious consideration.
There is a number of argument in favor of my stance but the most preponderant one lies in the fact that immigrants in most of the western countries have a sense of insecurity in their life. In fact, not only do people living in western societies deprive from various government entitlements but the native people also discriminate migrants in a number of areas such as receiving social and cultural services. We can find overwhelming evidence in support of the fact that the rise in the number of suicide people has increase dramatically in the past decade. Needless to say, all these demerits have a far-reaching impact in poor countries' people.
As a solution, steps to deal with this problems are many but the most preponderant one is not far or complicated but accessible and practicable. The primary one stems from the fact that by implementing stringent rules and regulation, government can ensure that native people won't involve in bullying or discrimination. For example, there are a number of studies from various governmental bodies that show that with strict policies and financial penalties in place, the number of such wrong practice bound to decline. Hence, only when convergent efforts from all sectors are ensured, we can expect to see a considerable amount of progress in racking xenophobia.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that although xenophobia is becoming a heated debate around the world, preventive and corrective action from the government can easily eradicate the issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...e. As a solution, steps to deal with this problems are many but the most preponde...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, for example, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 31.9359605911 163% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 304.0 242.827586207 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12828947368 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98934619991 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539473684211 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.0494513776 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.916666667 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109802121473 0.242375264174 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400133644492 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373977605211 0.071462118173 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748691711358 0.151781067708 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226406188447 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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