The kind of a person’s life depends on his/her personality. What’s your opinion of this, and use your own experience as examples.
In modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people on person's life depends on their personality or not. While, some people argue that external factors effects more on the success of someones life, but on my point of view, person's life highly depends on their personality. In this essay, I shall discuss factors to strengthen my view point while, analyzing the both side of the arguement.
First and foremost, there are myraid factors that effects someone's personality some of them are internal factors and some of them are external factors which could not be controlled by themselves. For an example, in a workplace an employee can win the heart of their employer throug their pleasing personality besides that, in school those students who posses a pleasing personality can achieve more during their academic career. Therefore, personality helps people to be successfull throughout their life.
On the other hand, some people beleive on external factors in acheiveing success in their life such as infrastructure, political and social factors which is highly turbulent in nature. For an instance, those who want to be successful in business should work hard irrespective of waiting the macro and micro environment be fine with the business. However, people should only consider on managing factors which they bears the controlling power.
In conclusion, it is recommended to enrich someones personality with good qualities, knowledge and common sense to shine in their specific field of study or business. In nutshell, governments bear the responsibility of empowering the workforce with appropriate knowledge and skill to be successful in their career and finally increasing the value of the country as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...an ongoing deliberation among people on persons life depends on their personality or no...
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Line 5, column 415, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'bear'
Suggestion: bear
...consider on managing factors which they bears the controlling power. In conclusion...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36029411765 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8932024946 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555147058824 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7582140218 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.545454545 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.25397266985 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0876959634517 0.242375264174 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428842879076 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461076732497 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0578388549344 0.151781067708 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527158807999 0.0609392437508 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 12.6369458128 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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