In less developed countries, tourism has developed significantly in the last decade, discuss the disadvantages and advantages.
Tourism is one of the major factors in the economy of the most of the developing countries. Apart from the agriculture and few industries like apparel, pharmaceutical,tourism industry plays an huge role in the economy of third world countries. Tourism has both good and bad effects and this essay will elaborate pros and cons of the tourism.
To begin with, most of the infrastructure facilities are developed in third world countries because of the tourism industry. Tourists are not interested in staying with less facilities. Hence, the governments in developing countries have been taken at least the basic steps in order to develop the necessary requirements. On the other hand, tourism industry has created lots of new employment opportunities in past few decades. It is a great solution for unemployment in developing countries. Furthermore, each and every country get a chance to spread the name of the country in the world and so that citizens of these countries get recognition where ever they go.
In contrast, tourism has its disadvantages also. Firstly, most of the developing countries are now facing the problem of illegal money and drugs. The younger generation is addicting to these drugs quickly destroying the future of the country. Moreover, various types of diseases are now spreading in developing countries such as AIDS. Finally, there is a huge trend that most of the students are joining tourism industry just pass out of the school, because they think that it is the best way to earn money. This trend is a huge threat for the future of the country.
To conclude, based on above mentioned factors it is clear that tourism industry has both advantages and disadvantages as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, moreover, so, third, well, apart from, at least, in contrast, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09608540925 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00426700593 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540925266904 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5647357904 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.25397266985 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253205372366 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900535454451 0.0925447433944 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725901266929 0.071462118173 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145905068628 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412525826486 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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