Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
The debate regarding regions affect successful persons or not is an old one, with shifting the attitudes of the people over the years. Proponents and opponents make their own cases to support their views regarding this unresolved issue. I think that, regions have some impacts on successful persons.
There are numerous arguments surrounding my viewpoint, but the most important factor to be considered is the education background of any succeeded person. In other words, the educational qualifications have higher impact on any person than the region he or she belongs to. Statistics from credible sources also revealed that, people from rural areas achieved their targets by trying hardly. To elaborate further, few pertinent examples can be taken into consideration.
On the other side of the fence, it is also possible to make an opposing case. It is argued that, especially children may get affected by their surroundings. Critics also believe that, strong distractions by regions may hindered the path to the success of anyone. However, people who advocate this viewpoint, fail to see the picture in a large context.
In conclusion, it seems fair and justifiable to say that, people may have some disturbances from the regions they live. But if anyone wanted to be succeed, there are many optional ways to do that.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, regarding, so, i think, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 214.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25700934579 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80736525533 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663551401869 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9304942595 50.4703680194 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.5384615385 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4615384615 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247718967778 0.242375264174 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858478835075 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920595436377 0.071462118173 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151018241932 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062611664775 0.0609392437508 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 82.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 74.5 Out of 90
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