Medical technology can increase life expectancy. Is it a blessing or curse?
One of the most conspicuous trends in today’s world is a colossal upsurge in innovation in the medical field that in this area doctors are using machines to cure people’s disease that gives a life expectancy. There is widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in masse’s life. However, there are some advantages and disadvantages, which I will discuss in upcoming paragraphs.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that in medical technology engineers gave us useful machines like MRI, CT-SCAN, X-ray and etcetera and these do not only contribute to a life of patients but also lead to numerous other benefits in various field. Thanks to a wide range of advantages it offers, not can only one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these blessings are standing one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chance of prosperity is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition in that it is only likely to help in one thrive and excel in varied areas, Besides, only one when follows such a system, can they ignore their horizons, thus learning attributes as responsibility, dedication, and perseverance. However, everyone is in favour of advantages and these technologies are a life saver for other’s life.
In the view of outlined above, There will be a nobody who will ignore the pros of medical technology and we cannot reject its advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06390977444 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02182920591 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.3470109956 50.4703680194 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.7 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 20.9669160288 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 7.25397266985 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203229285404 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700566516696 0.0925447433944 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514744825456 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112996107722 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165113220601 0.0609392437508 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 12.6369458128 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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