Nowadays more and more people engage in dangerous activities such as sky diving and motorcycling Are you in favour of them Use examples to support your opinion
One of the most conspicuous trend of today’s world is the colossal upsurge in the number of people's engagement in dangerous activities . There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to myriad concerns in one’s life . However , I entirely do not accept this and will explain why in this essay.
There are number of arguments in favor of my stance .The most preponderant one is that people interest in dangerous activities can not only contribute to doing something but also lead to numberous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages being offered by topic , not only can one benefit more when it comes to being affective , but they can also enhace the productivity and standard of their life with much ease , efficacy and convenience . Needless to say , all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of a better life is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proportion is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides only when one follow such a system , can one broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibilities , dedication and perseverance , Hence , it is apparent that why many are in favor of dangerous activities.
In view of the arguments outlined above , one can conclude that , the benefits of topic are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96566523605 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83561550713 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587982832618 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.6491307222 50.4703680194 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.555555556 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8888888889 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.33497536946 337% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.083377628375 0.242375264174 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346824014098 0.0925447433944 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460094098452 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0460120194909 0.151781067708 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278131152254 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.