Medical technology is responsible for the human’s life expectancy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this contemporary world, technology has immensely affected the life of every individual. There is hardly any sphere which is not influence by this gift of science. I strongly concur with this statement that advancement in medical technology helps people to live long life. In this essay, there will be an examination on both sides of contention, before deducing an even handed conclusion.
To commence with, there is a deluge of reasons in favor of medical technology advancement which helps people to make their life easier as compared to earlier. For instance, in ancient time people died because of less facilities in medical department. People was not able to cure their diseases due to less medicines. In earlier days, diagnose of a health hazard was tremendously herculean, yet these days it is possible because of new inventions.
On the flipside, there are various disadvantages of revolution in medical field. First and foremost, medical facilities are not affordable for every class of family. Sometime, it takes whole saving of a person for treatment and induces financial burden on family which may become engender of family conflict.
Agglomerating above elaborated points. One can iterate that, flourish in medical technology has enlighted the rate of life expectancy, but financial burden is a sweltering question for the families.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... helps people to make their life easier as compared to earlier. For instance, in ...
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Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun facilities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... in ancient time people died because of less facilities in medical department. Peopl...
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Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun medicines is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... not able to cure their diseases due to less medicines. In earlier days, diagnose of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1149.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 214.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3691588785 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93421109064 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630841121495 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3151492042 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3846153846 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4615384615 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 7.25397266985 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185952952331 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622092282775 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060637162373 0.071462118173 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11308244593 0.151781067708 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347663810282 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 53.1260098522 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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