Currently, nations and governments are challenged with unprecedented number of environmental problems. Identifying the most important and urgent among these issues have sparked a heated debate among groups and individuals. Climate change may be the most crucial environmental problem that all societies and governments should focus on. This essay will elaborate why climate change should be our priority and how we can solve it.
One of the most pressing problems that nations and governments are facing is climate change. This widespread and complex environmental problem affects all of humanity. Moreover, it does not only affect the living but will also affect the future generations in greater intensity. For example, residents have abandoned a city in China because of intolerable amount of carbon emissions and unlivable environmental conditions. This is a perennial problem for all nations and societies that merits close and undivided attention.
Fortunately, researches are done on how to mitigate the risks of climate change, and they are showing good results. One experiment is encouraging communities to plant more trees to decrease our carbon foot print and increase the oxygen levels in the air. A perfect example is the campaign that encourages each student to plant 10 trees before graduation. This will surely increase the number of adult trees in communities after a decade. This is a feasible and plausible solution to climate change.
In conclusion, this essay discussed why all of us should focus our energies in resolving the problems of climate change. As inhabitants of planet Earth, it is our responsibility and sacred obligation to protect and preserve our natural resources. Planting more trees will provide a natural process for the environment to go back to its balanced state. I suggest that governments should support these environmental movements by providing better funding and infrastructure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1207.87684729 136% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51851851852 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0462803637 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565656565657 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 379.143842365 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.593658379 50.4703680194 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.0555555556 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.25397266985 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107097554382 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377461586843 0.0925447433944 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485016060258 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0676584943436 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536205080351 0.0609392437508 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 55.0591133005 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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