Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some, it acts as a companion. What is your opinion about this?
Television was a revolutionary invention that was made and to date, it is not only evolving but it has become an integral part of our life. While some might not agree with the statement of television can act as a companion or a medium to spread news and awareness. I believe, TV not only acts a medium of awareness but also acts as a companion. This essay will further discuss my agreement with the statement.
Television has changed the way awareness was delivered before its invention. Due to the advent of technology, news and other important information started getting delivered right in our television, this act of technology became the source for awareness and also an act of companion for those who started treating television, not only for the source of awareness but for entertainment purpose as well. Nowadays Television equipped with the latest technology enables more entertainment option because of which people are more drawn towards television and treat them as their companion.
Furthermore, one may argue with the statement that Internet has now become the important aspect for everyone life because of the facility it provides is far more than Television does and also it is feasible to carry along with us but when it comes to Television, it shows more relevant and quick access to information than the Internet where one might not be sure about the information also the entertainment provided by television with its quality at the comfort of our home that cannot be matched with the Internet and this overall shows how television not only act as the source of awareness but also act as a companion as well.
To conclude, Television not only act as a source of awareness but also act as a companion as discussed above.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92542372881 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85234447484 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467796610169 0.580463131201 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.5024630542 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 172.21204271 50.4703680194 341% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.444444444 104.977214359 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.7777777778 20.9669160288 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275006626892 0.242375264174 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131598973543 0.0925447433944 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799563358124 0.071462118173 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186228190294 0.151781067708 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765999070516 0.0609392437508 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 12.6369458128 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.3980295567 142% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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