In some countries, the number of shootings increases because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
While some people may correlate with the number of guns present at home might be directly proportional to the increase rate of shooting, I completely disagree with the above fact, as the increase in shooting rates could have some other problems rather people owning guns at their home. We will further discuss how there can be other possibilities for the increase in shooting rate.
Increase in shooting could have many possible reasons, one of which could be the increasing crime rate, as the increase in crime rate could directly affect the increase in shooting rate, one could easily question the viability of the protection and governance of that place. If the place does not contain law and order, the crime rate will increase and that could be one the reason for shooting rate being increased, this clearly explains about the people holding guns at home as no direct relation with the shooting rates that is being seen.
Furthermore, we could see the reason why people might own guns at the home because of the increase in the shooting rate. As owning a gun gives security to control or defend such situation, one could draw clear thoughts for the reason of owning guns at their home because of shooting rate increase. Hence the reason for people holding guns shows more crime rate at places they live which directly incorporates the reason behind the increase in the shooting rates.
To conclude, the reason for the increase in the shooting rates might have multiple reasons apart from the people, who are holding guns at their home, that might show the defense they might have to resolve such situation of shooting and not the other way around.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 299, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...home because of shooting rate increase. Hence the reason for people holding guns show...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, may, so, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 6.10837438424 278% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87985865724 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31896365397 2.71678728327 85% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448763250883 0.580463131201 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.5024630542 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.6996287119 50.4703680194 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.625 104.977214359 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.375 20.9669160288 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287488189088 0.242375264174 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172153901699 0.0925447433944 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685509450728 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213623798825 0.151781067708 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524492534659 0.0609392437508 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 12.6369458128 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.94827586207 181% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.3980295567 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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