One way to solve the problem of congestion in cities is to build sky trains which run overhead rather than on or under the ground.What are the advantages and disadvantages of using this solution to solve congestion?

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One way to solve the problem of congestion in cities is to build sky trains which run overhead rather than on or under the ground.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of using this solution to solve congestion?

One of the monsterous problem our cities are facing , especially the metropolitan one is Traffic Congestion. In the past, it has been observed that - The city's administration has been grappling with this problem , and still no concrete way have been devisied so far. One way to overcome the congestion problem is to build Sky Train which will run over the city without disturbing the local city traffic on the ground. However, it has it own advantage and disadvantge.

The following advantage, this solutions renders to the economy . Once Sky Train are introduced, heavier traffic can escape coming to the city into the internal roads of cities which are usually narrow to accomodate bigger traffic. (2) This also act as bypass for those whose destination lies elsewhere but not in the city. This allows them, to avoid entering the city unnecessarily, (3) Building a sky train over the ground would also helps to avoid constructing the infrastructure on and under the growun which otherwise would destabilize the lower foundation of the city. As building an underground tunnel, no matter what sophisticated level of safety one may incorporate, chances are there it would render the whole structure destabilize.

However, there is a negative side of it. This will kill the aesthetic beauty of the city as it will then cover the city with envelop of huge concrete building and pillars which are required to support Sky Trains.

Having said that, there are still lot many ways through which beauty of city can be mainatined inspite of building a sky train. On a long run, the advantage of bringing sky train far more exceed the disadvantage rendered by it to the economy and hence i believe Sky Train will be good slotion to the congestion problem.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, may, so, still, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96245733788 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78812682902 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566552901024 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2701320062 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.846153846 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 7.25397266985 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387110041904 0.242375264174 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124732565 0.0925447433944 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950666113467 0.071462118173 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22761397458 0.151781067708 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733709616851 0.0609392437508 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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