The ownership of cars should be restricted to one per family in order to reduce traffic congestion and pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The importance of car ownership, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of traffic congestion and pollution has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on our environment in recent years. It can be agreed that the ownership of cars should be restricted to one per family. This essay will elaborate both positive and negative impacts of this topic and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous ways to explain why we should limit car ownership, but the most conspicuous one is rooted in the fact that reducing the number of cars can resolve many issues related to traffic and environment, which can help to improve our living standard. As an illustration, research in this area invariably reveals that human’s living standard has improved significantly in recent years after government put a restriction. Thus, it is apparent that limiting car ownership has some obvious benefits.
Nevertheless, opponents of this trend tend to believe that in some cases the restriction might not necessarily lead to a positive outcome, which can cause many dramatic problems and permanently damage the environment. For example, according to a new research from Harvard University, the environment has become more polluted and traffic congestions happen more often when the government decided to ban this act. Therefore, it is obviously true that this policy might not be the best option.
In view of arguments outlined above, one can conclude that, limiting the ownership of car is prominent, although it has a number of drawbacks that should be well handled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.94672131148 5.00649968141 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.78930401428 2.71678728327 139% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647540983607 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.5024630542 166% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 293.562704076 50.4703680194 582% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 207.285714286 104.977214359 197% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.8571428571 20.9669160288 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.25397266985 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231661734357 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127154920564 0.0925447433944 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131603202661 0.071462118173 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144648639949 0.151781067708 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058802247735 0.0609392437508 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.0 12.6369458128 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.05 53.1260098522 38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.9458128079 173% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.82 11.5310837438 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.28 8.32886699507 135% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 55.0591133005 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.3980295567 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.