Parents are responsible for the behavior of the children. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Recently, the phenomenon of the parent's responsibilities for children has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question “are parents responsible for the behavior of children?”. Whereas it is a widely held view that children behavior is highly beneficial, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the social standpoint, parents responsibility are bound up inextricably with social policies, which indicates they lead to both parents behavior and children responsibility. As a well-known example, longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientific in 2014 demonstrates the relationship between children behavior and social background as well as an exponential increase in positive achievement. Their academic criticism was impressive. Researchers, nevertheless, paid heed to the behavior of the children, parents educations, and social behavior alike. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of behavior pattern is correlated positively with not only children behavior but also parents responsibility.
Within the realm of family background, without the slightest doubt, parental tasks attribute to parents responsibility, in that it would come down to behavior change, family responsibility, and family rules. A salient example of such attribution is family policy, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take children activity for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint mental problems. Likewise, hardly had they confined their attention to parents duty, personal behavior, and even good behavior. Besides, this criterion is an indispensable part of modern lifestyle. Hence, it is reasonable to infer to the pivotal role of parents responsibilities for children.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes “all’s well that ends’ well,” after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that the advantages of parental responsibilities are of more significance. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'parent'.
Suggestion: parent
...test doubt, parental tasks attribute to parents responsibility, in that it would come d...
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Line 4, column 90, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...pos;all's well that ends' well,' after analyzing what elaborated above,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, hence, however, if, likewise, nevertheless, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1207.87684729 156% => OK
No of words: 316.0 242.827586207 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.9746835443 5.00649968141 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47831886564 2.71678728327 128% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 139.433497537 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613924050633 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 379.143842365 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3858430329 50.4703680194 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.866666667 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.25397266985 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338380790567 0.242375264174 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113759661722 0.0925447433944 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933408849652 0.071462118173 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207398197662 0.151781067708 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747126920256 0.0609392437508 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 12.6369458128 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 53.1260098522 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.35 11.5310837438 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.32886699507 124% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 55.0591133005 205% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.94827586207 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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