Parents are responsible for their children's behavior. Do you agree or disagree?
Although such topics, in all likelihood, will never yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on the importance of parents in children education can lead to thought-provoking discussions. Irrespective of the numerous arguments that exit on either side, my opinion is that there is a significance role for parents when it comes to children education.
There are a number of reasons in favor of my stance. To begin with, children education takes its first place in schools, but parents have more responsibility towards their children in this process. It is also important to note that when kids go their home after the lengthy day of lectures, parents to ensure that the assigned home works are completed successfully. Therefore, the aforementioned discussion shows that not only teachers carry out the responsibility for education, but also parents share with a significant effort.
Another pivotal aspect of the argument is that the education is not learning science or math, but it is how to have a good behavior. First and foremost, children spend their most of time at home with parents, as result; some disciplines are required for kids to instrument their personality. This exemplified that parents responsibility may exceed teacher`s expectation.
In conclusion, I see that there is equally evidence to support the arguments I have provided, and hence, my opinion is that we cannot deny parents effort for children education.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36681222707 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22880217993 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589519650655 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2094776087 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.9 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278308444767 0.242375264174 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103147367503 0.0925447433944 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551482621865 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166932350351 0.151781067708 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409988627135 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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