parents responsibility
The importance of parents responsibility for their children which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion the farmer proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favoring the positive impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion. There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this arguments but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that children spend time with their parents consequently, they learn language manners and good behavior from their parents. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that parents have legal responsibility of upbringing child and they cannot avoid that needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead. Elaborating my viewpoints, there are some more merits but one of the crucial effects is that children are very close tThe importance of parents responsibility for their children which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion the farmer proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favoring the positive impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion. There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this arguments but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that children spend time with their parents consequently, they learn language manners and good behavior from their parents. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that parents have legal responsibility of upbringing child and they cannot avoid that needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead. Elaborating my viewpoints, there are some more merits but one of the crucial effects is that children are very close to parents and parents closely monitor child’s growth besides parents are pretty much of positive and negative of child. Hence it is apparent why many are against of this trend. According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that benefits of as parents play critical and vital role in child’s upbringing therefore they are also responsible for child’s act and should be held legally.o parents and parents closely monitor child’s growth besides parents are pretty much of positive and negative of child. Hence it is apparent why many are against of this trend. According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that benefits of as parents play critical and vital role in child’s upbringing therefore they are also responsible for child’s act and should be held legally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, hence, so, therefore, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 10.5418719212 247% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 8.36945812808 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 5.94088669951 269% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 20.9802955665 238% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 31.9359605911 178% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2504.0 1207.87684729 207% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 475.0 242.827586207 196% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27157894737 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 3.92707691288 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82245369764 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.298947368421 0.580463131201 52% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 778.5 379.143842365 205% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.0224509991 50.4703680194 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.294117647 104.977214359 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9411764706 20.9669160288 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 6.9802955665 186% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266420025651 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977334604825 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10614907926 0.071462118173 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266420025651 0.151781067708 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.32886699507 85% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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