Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion? Support it with personal examples.
In the modern era, there is an ongoing debate among the public around the world about legally responsible of children' acts. While specifically strong arguments claim that parents should be hold legally responsible for their children's manner , some luminaries dispute otherwise. The agenda of this article is to discuss advantages of parent responsibility of their children and clarify how impacts on society.
To start with, there are several reason why parents legall responsilty of thieir children is supported. First and foremost is that the first role model of children in their lifes are parents. Secondly, it is highly argued that parents should have strong sense of responsibility of their children which they brought to this world. From my own experience when I was as elementry school I breaked the glass on my neighbeour window which he asked recompense of my father. so after that event I have tried to control my manner in order not to disturb my parent. Therefore, it is highly obvious that parents resposibility can lead to childeren control their acts.
Moreover, there is no doubt that every body personality is uniqe so parents can not control their childeren brehaviour. In addition to this information, it is strongly claimed that children need to stand on their own feets on take the responsibility of their manners. For exapmle, a recent social researche conducted by University of Melbourne in 2010 has shown that approximately ten percentage on successful elite were no any distraction for their parents. Hence, it is quiet clear that individuals have responsible for their acts.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, my sentiment is that although parents have strong impact on their children, offspring should learn to responsible for their acts from early ages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in addition, no doubt, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 20.9802955665 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24914675768 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84839931976 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563139931741 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5394046955 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.857142857 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350679856354 0.242375264174 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132030190872 0.0925447433944 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684693622547 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230640068939 0.151781067708 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053505164007 0.0609392437508 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.