Parents should be held legally responsible for their children's acts. What is your opinion? Support it with personal examples.
Nowadays, it is increasingly acknowledged that the children's action is one of the biggest issues which parents are facing. While some people believe that children have to take responsibilities of their acts themselves, others advocate that parents should be held legally responsible for the actions of their children. As far as I am concerned, parents have the duty to keep watch over their children's acts.
People who emphasize the importance of the responsibilities should be held by children are primarily focusing on the independence. They advocate that everyone is an independent individual; parents cannot control what their children do, therefore children need to be held legally responsible for their acts. Nevertheless, this argument does not hold water. The main reason is that children are not mature like adults and does not have the ability to think independently. That is why most of the countries have the laws for protection of children.
It is evidently reasonable for me to believe that parents must take legal responsibilities of children's actions. The main justification of this view is that children’s behavior and way of thinking are largely affected by their parents. That is to say, they imitate what their parents do and copy their parents’ ways of thinking. Hence, parents are the primary source of children’s learning. If children have inappropriate acts, parents have their responsibilities.
In a nutshell, while this controversial topic never fails to attract the public attention, we may safely reach the conclusion that parents should be held legally responsible for the actions of their children is correct in respect of this issue.
Comments
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43346007605 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24299607186 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520912547529 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1068368737 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.071428571 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429143550027 0.242375264174 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164382670953 0.0925447433944 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10972195879 0.071462118173 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300888727948 0.151781067708 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438576209463 0.0609392437508 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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