In the past 100 years, there have been many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes, and computers. What do you think is the most important invention of them? Why? Greatest invention in the last 100 years, medicine, science or technology?
The inventions our society has seen in the last hundred years are countless, but the invent of technology is the greatest of all. It has transformed our lives in many ways. From the way we work and communicate to the way we travel, it has intricately involved in all aspects of our life. This essay will discuss the reasons why technology is the best invention of the century.
The invent of technology is advantageous in many ways. Firstly, the technology helps the employers to make a decision without human intervention. Together with Artificial Intelligence, computers can perform well-made decision which many companies deem superfluous. Secondly, the technology provides plenty of storage that human brain cannot even think of. The storage plays a significant role in our modern society with all the data that we use in our day-to-day life. Finally, the computer technology provides the fast and accurate results in many cases.
Moreover, the technology provides fast and instant communication. People can connect to anyone from anywhere in the world without much complication. Besides, technology offers business owners with great opportunities, and it can spur the business.
The technology has become an unavoidable aspect of our lives, and the benefits are manifold. In my opinion, it is the most beneficial inventions that this century has seen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in many cases, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 216.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32407407407 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99105605493 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564814814815 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 8.0 1.56157635468 512% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.8836671498 50.4703680194 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.6666666667 104.977214359 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4 20.9669160288 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181556499692 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705737008928 0.0925447433944 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796109418337 0.071462118173 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109321596807 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555850184335 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 53.1260098522 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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