In the past 100 years, there have been many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes, and computers. What do you think is the most important invention of them? Why? Greatest invention in the last 100 years, medicine, science or technology?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals the best invention of centuries has been one most prominent topic in contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analysis and explain whether science, technology and medicines. I will elaborate this notion in further paragraphs with my point of views.
To begin with, masses had to suffer a lot of ailments in ancient time because they do not have any solution of those maladies which they faced. Fortunately, with the help of a lot of researchers and doctors there are myriad antibiotic has been invented. These days, doctors play segment role in patience’s life. Now, people can get solution of any disease as compared to earlier time.
Moving further, almost every ailment has solution now. To cite an example, in past masses used to die with normal disease which were not cause of death but nowadays, people get well very soon. Doctors have solution of these kinds of harmful ailments like, Malaria, HIV and Diabetes. These were the major diseases which cause the death.
To conclude, I firmly believe that because of myriad inventions people have made their life easier. Life is very important so we should be careful about our life. Because of inventions, people may have long life as compared to ancient time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 224, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'antibiotics'?
Suggestion: antibiotics
...esearchers and doctors there are myriad antibiotic has been invented. These days, doctors ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02597402597 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56848257789 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632034632035 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5112784466 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.4 104.977214359 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 20.9669160288 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46666666667 7.25397266985 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105262352496 0.242375264174 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343922238689 0.0925447433944 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378813730434 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0643970620245 0.151781067708 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418185843739 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 12.6369458128 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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